Hey do you remember the academic english game for the topic sentence. Well the free form writing goes so well(and funny). We're goaing to play it again.
But there is rules for it :
1. You can't post twice at the same time.(i will delete the post)
2. You can post again after another player post once after your post
3. Funny is ok but don't go too far(i mean really too far)
4. Use nicknames or initials ( you can use name and names[ I don't say you can't] )
5. What happen in this post stay in this post( don't take it personally [this apply for you too andrew] )
Post your sentence on the comment.
HEY BREAKING NEWS THE STORY DIDN'T END COME IN ADD THE COMMENT.
Once upon a time there is an ojek driver.
ReplyDeleteHe loves to have race with other ojek driver.
ReplyDeleteHe is the legend of the street.
ReplyDeleteOne day, a motorcycle gang challenge him to race.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, he rejected that request.
ReplyDeleteThe motorcycle gang insisted on having a race with him, that they kidnapped his family just to make him race.
ReplyDeleteIf the ojek driver didn't accept the challenge, the gang would kill his family.
ReplyDeleteto save his family race he did.
ReplyDeleteWhat a bad luck ! He finds that his motorcycle is broken !
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ReplyDeleteBefore the race begins, he do some preparations which will help him in the race
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ReplyDeleteSo here it is, the race begin.
ReplyDeleteIt looks that he has an awesome start.
ReplyDeleteBut, OMG he forgot his helmet
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ReplyDeleteSuddenly, a police comes and stops the ojek driver.
ReplyDeleteBut he just wouldn't stop, this is the race to save his family!
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, he hit a big wall !
ReplyDelete*boom*
ReplyDeleteHe become dizzy and wrecked his motorcycle
ReplyDeleteThen he Realized that one of his leg is missing.
ReplyDelete(Keep on going guys this is great. For the other that didn't joined yet, come and play too.)
ReplyDeleteSuddenly an alien space ship come and abducted him !
ReplyDeleteThe ojek driver tried using multi languages to communicate with the aliens, yet to no avail.
ReplyDeleteSo using multi languages, the ojek driver know that the name of the alien is Endraw..
ReplyDeleteAnd finally, the ojek driver realizes that his real name is Loen
ReplyDeleteAfter realizing his name, the ojek driver fall in love with the alien.
ReplyDeleteThe alien didn't care about it, loen was broken hearted
ReplyDeleteSo he take a decision that he would like to die together with his beloved Endraw....
ReplyDeleteHe tried to blow up the UFO with dynamite that he hid in his clothes
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, he failed to do so, and got blown alone!
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ReplyDeleteAnd so, Loen has killed himself.
ReplyDeleteBut Endraw take pity on him, he protect Loen from the explosion using his extraterrestrials-explosive-proof technology.
ReplyDeleteAnd finally they live happily ever after.
ReplyDelete~The End~
ReplyDeleteWhen suddenly the naughty Chilly Willy take the "~The End~" for fire wood because he is cold and almost freezing to death
ReplyDeleteThe naughty Chilly Willy is a psychopath killer with a synthetic hand connected to a chainsaw and knife for a pegleg.
ReplyDeleteBut the naughty chilly Willy was instantly pummeled by Loen's wife & family, knowing that his husband, Loen had an affair with the alien Endraw!.
ReplyDeleteThe Naugthy Chilly willy Retaliates by cutting Loen's wife's leg & arms.
ReplyDeleteSurprisingly, Loen has an ability to regenerate the part of alien's body with a certain cost.
ReplyDeleteWith the cost of his right eye.
ReplyDeletebut it's okay for Loen... he pay with his right eye... and replace that missing eye with "SHARINGAN"!!
ReplyDeleteWith sharingan he tried to use amaterasu on Chilly Willy, but he hit Endraw.
ReplyDeleteLoen shouted "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"!
ReplyDeleteThen he woke up and realized it was all a dream, but he must hurry so he is in time for the Big Race!
ReplyDeleteAfter taking a bath, he saw his right eye in the mirror become red and bloody.
ReplyDeleteThen he saw Endraw on his bed sleeping and Morpheus on the chair waiting for him.
ReplyDeleteMorpheus said to Loen that "The Matrix" has been taken by transformed Chilly Willy's Terrabots which can change their size and hack everything while also having special weapon called "The CS Manual Shotgun", with the "made by Chrys Gundam" text on it, Loen shocked and get Endraw for the "Big Race", racing all the way to "The Matrix" into the specific place called "Valhalla, land of Valkyrie".
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